That's a true mongrel of a system. Did it actually keep it cool or has it not run in anger yet?
The Metro had the sandwich plate to feed the heater instead of the tap at the clutch end of the head - you've got both. Why?
The heater tap should provide coolant to the heater matrix and then return to the bottom pipe - you've just got it linked to the top pipe so it's not going to do anything useful. If anything it will reduce the flow of coolant through the head and may cause problems.
On the Metro the expansion tank did connect to the bottom hose with the bleed takeoff on the stat housing also connected to the expansion tank's neck (but still on the pressure side of the seal).
On the Metro the sandwich plate replaced the heater tap and also the bypass hose as it fed the radiator but it was also below the thermostat so it allowed a flow of coolant through the heater matrix before the stat opened (the Metro's matrix was in the engine bay so it didn't matter that it was always warm). That pre-flow is necessary so you need to make allowance for it if you are running a Metro head & pump with no bypass hose. You do have the stat between the sandwich plate and the stat housing and not between the head and the sandwich plate don't you?
It's difficult to tell from the angle of the photo but is the expansion tank actually higher than the stat housing?
Personally I'd suggest you go with either a Mini system with the expansion tank added to account for the loss of expansion space and filler cap in the radiator OR the Metro system. Not some mish-mash of the two.
Iain