Looks fine to me.
I don't think the vent pipe is a standard size and it not the usual fuel pipe - its quite stretchy and is a push fit only, it isn't normally clamped from what I remember. Nick has given you the correct link.
The second time you have to pull the tank out to check the filter you will wish you hd put it in a more accesible place.
Why would he need to pull the tank out to check the filter?
From what I’ve found it should be 3/16” or 4.8mm, and it looks like the hose I’ve been sent is 5.2mm being sold as 3/16”. I had been using a length of diesel injection hose that was a nice snug push fit, but the vented end under the car (not near the exhaust) had started to soften/melt assuming from the ethanol that’s now in the petrol.
This mini also lives in a dryish garage and only used during the summer, so dirt and lack of asses to the filter won’t be a problem. It’s also at standard ride height (it drives better) rather than being lowered so even I can slide my head under the rear valance for a quick look.
And as for the bath in fuel whenever the filter needs changing, obviously someone’s never tried clamping the fuel hose directly at the tank in the boot. And I’m not bothered about having to change hose clips (I consider them consumable) As someone has never tried to save a few pence on a new hose clip refitting a bottom hose to the radiator (which is a pita on a mini) and then finding the hose clip fails to tighten properly or strips....